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The more you reread it, the more you notice how impressive the wordplay is.
A glassy, jarred look on her face.
Took me a few to get the noodle part lmao, It just naturally reads as a euphemism.
should have seen it coming when he said saucy
Or when he said prego
“jarred look” lol
Or “noodle”
Or “colorless almost transparent”
Great foreshadowing
I am on the internet for so long and read the whole thing. Disappointed with myself.
Son, I am dissapoint
Goddamn this one got me good
This one is clever.
These fucking posts man