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Cake day: June 30th, 2023

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  • But why though? The meter isn’t great and neither are the rhymes. Hope does not liyerally have feathers and there is no deeper allegory. Also there is nothing about crumbs or idioms related to crumbs that give good closure. Not to mention that all the weather references are vapid and empty

    She is famous, and yet this poem is a trash pile. Can I do better? You know what probably yes.