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Cake day: June 28th, 2023

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  • Quick read, and a nice wholesome story about someone who’s life got upended and a old friend / love interest helps her come back.

    Real critique: too much time skips, too little character development. There is no real-life conflict, everything just goes perfectly as planned. Also, a little savior-y: this girl goes through something that messes her up and she goes full hermit mode, until her childhood friend comes along, and suddenly she is just able to drop all that baggage? I liked the art mostly (tho not a fan of the mammoth boobs on the female character).